- "Public performance should not be done by friends and family but the professionals players should be engaged."
- Ellen played a minor part: Lucy's character.
- Lucie - sum of Ellen's appearance and the final 'e.'
- "I must say I like my cult."
- Young Dickens saw many unsettling, many disturbing sites: a place of wretchedness or darkness but also a place of great fascination.
- Wrote about London like a special correspondent of posterity,
- London is like a newspaper: everything is there and everything is disconnected.
- His visits resulted in political change.
- Paris was a vibrant, modernizing city - during Dickens' time.
- "Sets us back in time and at the same time brings us sharply back to the present day."
- Revolution was possible by the lower class population.
- The novel was a warning by Dickens - contrasting between pre and post revolutionary England.
- In correspondence with Carlisle, it made Dickens compress his material and restrict his focus - the monthly serial parts.
- Dickens distributed his materials based on demand of monthly serial parts.
- He wrote as he went along.
- He was pleased with the novel.
- The French dramatization never happened.
- There were adaptations of "Tale of Two Cities," the most famous one being "The Only Way."
- We travel along roads, we hear footsteps, we hear echos - as the past suddenly returns to haunt us.
- "Echo in footsteps": Dickens can build up the inevitability and the momentum as he forces the movement of the plot forward.
- "Show me the North Tower."
- "The sea of dark and threatening water..."
- "Every human creature is constituted to be that profound secret and a mystery to other"; every room, every heart, every mind is a mystery to the world.
Wednesday, January 28, 2015
TALE OF TWO CITIES LECTURE NOTES
THE OBSESSION TO CONNECT
Poetry. Literature. Songs. Music. If asked a practical, typical individual without much insight into either of these, they would say that they are four different mediums of art. In a way, they actually are, but obviously, there's more to the story than that. They are an intermingled medium with aspects that are incomplete without each other. It is almost invisible to the naked eye, or the naked ear in this example, to distinguish between one and the other but the connection felt through the heart (the connection Keith Richards was talking about) is evidence enough for the significance of each of them in an individual's life.
It is extremely hard to achieve a mastery to where one's writing, mind, and thoughts flow smoothly from one to the other without consciously thinking about them and once that is achieved, one will himself become the masterpiece instead of creating one. I believe that is what Richards's quote means - it is the passion in one's heart that almost forces him to make a difference and somehow form a connection between these four, yet one, mediums in life and make the kind of difference that is almost unimaginable. If that connection is felt, it's as if a glass of beer is given to an alcoholic - it's almost addictive. That kind of obsession is what keeps us all going; for some it's money, for some it's fame, for some it's love, for some it's satisfaction, for some it's happiness - whatever it is and however it is that one persona can connect with another, a new life is formed and a new flower is blossomed.
It is extremely hard to achieve a mastery to where one's writing, mind, and thoughts flow smoothly from one to the other without consciously thinking about them and once that is achieved, one will himself become the masterpiece instead of creating one. I believe that is what Richards's quote means - it is the passion in one's heart that almost forces him to make a difference and somehow form a connection between these four, yet one, mediums in life and make the kind of difference that is almost unimaginable. If that connection is felt, it's as if a glass of beer is given to an alcoholic - it's almost addictive. That kind of obsession is what keeps us all going; for some it's money, for some it's fame, for some it's love, for some it's satisfaction, for some it's happiness - whatever it is and however it is that one persona can connect with another, a new life is formed and a new flower is blossomed.
Tuesday, January 27, 2015
WHAT'S THE STORY
"It was a long period of peace, prosperity, refined sensibilities, and national self-confidence for Britain." This phrase describing the Victorian time period perfectly corresponds with the theme, content and title of "Great Expectations" by Charles Dickens.
Since most of the population in the Victorian time period was living an elevated lifestyle with sophistication and prosperity, every individual in the society was expected to somehow rise to the bar of standards. Pip is the same kind of character, where he lives with various personalities, various lifestyles, and various life expectations and desires. Pip was not only pressurized by expectations from the society but also from the individuals in his life. Hence the title, "Great Expectations." I believe that Dickens would have written this because he somehow could relate to Pip and the hurdles and obstacles from his own life.
Literary elements such as foil characters, Mr. Jaggery and Joe Gargery, or personification - the shadow always surrounding Estella's face, progresses the plot of the story forward along with the sense of depth in each character's life and characteristics. Life and story of each individual character is almost a story in itself.
By achieving all this, Dickens produces a work of art that is relatable for every person, no matter in what era because society, in one way or another, keeps pressurizing a person from his youth to grow up into an adult that will benefit others more than himself.
Since most of the population in the Victorian time period was living an elevated lifestyle with sophistication and prosperity, every individual in the society was expected to somehow rise to the bar of standards. Pip is the same kind of character, where he lives with various personalities, various lifestyles, and various life expectations and desires. Pip was not only pressurized by expectations from the society but also from the individuals in his life. Hence the title, "Great Expectations." I believe that Dickens would have written this because he somehow could relate to Pip and the hurdles and obstacles from his own life.
Literary elements such as foil characters, Mr. Jaggery and Joe Gargery, or personification - the shadow always surrounding Estella's face, progresses the plot of the story forward along with the sense of depth in each character's life and characteristics. Life and story of each individual character is almost a story in itself.
By achieving all this, Dickens produces a work of art that is relatable for every person, no matter in what era because society, in one way or another, keeps pressurizing a person from his youth to grow up into an adult that will benefit others more than himself.
Monday, January 26, 2015
मेरा भारत महान: MY INDIA IS GREAT!
Today, January 26th, is celebrated as Republic Day in India. Ever since childhood years, I have heard the phrase " My India is great!" Since I wasn't aware of other countries, their policies, and their development, I easily believed, in fact, passionately, in this phrase. But let me back up first! Republic Day is celebrated because today was the day in 1948 when our republic government was first formed. The children in India are instilled with so much love, respect, and passion towards the patriotic country that a true, a true, Indian will defend our motherland till his last breath (as much exaggerated as it sounds, it's not; this is serious, I'm serious!).
After I grew up and was exposed to the entrepreuship of the world, my feelings and respect for the culture and tradition of India. The love towards family, the faith in various Gods, and the acknowledgment of every individual's rights and beliefs - draws me closer and closer to it. Moving to America didn't pull me away from appreciating my culture, but strengthened the bond between me and my homeland.
Even though we are taught to be patriotic, we still learn from other developed countries and try to improve ourselves and I know we will.
Again, मेरा भारत महान|
After I grew up and was exposed to the entrepreuship of the world, my feelings and respect for the culture and tradition of India. The love towards family, the faith in various Gods, and the acknowledgment of every individual's rights and beliefs - draws me closer and closer to it. Moving to America didn't pull me away from appreciating my culture, but strengthened the bond between me and my homeland.
Even though we are taught to be patriotic, we still learn from other developed countries and try to improve ourselves and I know we will.
Again, मेरा भारत महान|
Wednesday, January 21, 2015
"INTERESTING" DISCUSSION
While having a discussion about Dickens, his technique, and the plot of "Great Expectations," I suddenly received a text; it was from Lilly. Upon reading it, it made perfect sense to connect it with the lecture we were having. Even though analyzing an author's purpose and theme of his piece of work takes knowledge, perspective, patience, and technicality, it also requires so much passion towards the issue, that it gets irritating after a while. Sometimes, all I want and expect (wow, the book's title is just perfect!) is to sit in my room with a cup of hot chocolate in one hand and a great book in another, which can engross my thoughts and emotions into it to such an extent that I feel as if I am living in their world and experiencing their, well, experiences. At that perfect moment, I can almost guarantee no reader, an English professor or an author or a simple student like me, would even imagine themselves analyzing. I love literature and reading, not because of its depth or my capabilities of analyzation (which, by the way ranges from average to genius; I just have to be in the mood, I guess!) but only because it lets me escape the world of negativity and pressure, to adventure and love. When I saw this picture, I knew I had to share it somehow, just didn't know on what occasion. I thank you to give me the opportunity to do so. I know this is not the traditional discussion an English teacher would expect, but neither this class nor you go by the traditionality of the world!!!
Tuesday, January 20, 2015
LITERARY ELEMENTS REMIX
When it comes to vocabulary or literary elements (or Flocabulary, figurative language, as my source uses), I'm someone who either tries to find a short way out or hopes to avoid it until required to do it. So, to make it easier, I look at visual representation of the words, such as images, videos, art, for me to connect to. Visualization allows my perspective to come in place and take the meaning of the word to the next level. So, without further ado, here is a short video on some literary terms.
CAUTION: IT IS A RAP! VIEWER DISCRETION ADVISED, ESPECIALLY FOR CONCERNED PARENTS!
There are many more where that came from. Can be found on this website: http://www.flocabulary.com/
Music makes anything easier, especially if it has a comical edge to it.
..... And many more. What I suggest or recommend is to discover a way to make the "plot," "theme," and "characterization" of the topic easier through any medium possible. Resources are available all around the world; now it's time we use it!!!
CAUTION: IT IS A RAP! VIEWER DISCRETION ADVISED, ESPECIALLY FOR CONCERNED PARENTS!
There are many more where that came from. Can be found on this website: http://www.flocabulary.com/
Music makes anything easier, especially if it has a comical edge to it.
..... And many more. What I suggest or recommend is to discover a way to make the "plot," "theme," and "characterization" of the topic easier through any medium possible. Resources are available all around the world; now it's time we use it!!!
ALL THAT DAVID COPPERFIELD KIND OF CRAP
When I searched the denotative meaning of crap, one of the definitions I found was "fail in what one is attempting to do." When I read this definition, I realized something about the quote from "Catcher in the Rye" that I never did before. Salinger was mocking the techniques that Dickens used to characterize his characters, with detailed description of past, present, and gradual development to the future: Salinger believed that through thorough descriptions and characterizations, Dickens lost the essence and failed in creating a strong literary piece of work. I think what Salinger meant when he alluded to "David Copperfield," written by Charles Dickens, is to emphasize the importance of actions and thoughts more than minute details about the particular personality of the character. I believe that Salinger is a kind of author that allows his readers to analyze and interpret his characters based on their own experiences and perception. Salinger is proving that even though his protagonist is similar to that of Dickens's, with similar past, personalities, and expectations (no pun intended), he approaches him extremely differently than Dickens. Even though both the authors are strong in their approach with differing literary techniques, readers might prefer one over the other solely based on preferences on "told what to think, believe, and analyze" or "allowed what to think, believe, and analyze."
CHARLES DICKENS: HERE WE GO!!!
- A novel of education, of maturity: Buildungsroman
- An appropriate fantasy for Pip: feels he is different.
- Normal path of life isn't good enough.
- "Am I wicked?" A repetitive question for Pip.
- Doesn't know what normal is.
- Adopts male role model: fatherless.
- Magwitch - threat to the outside adult world; children needs protection.
- Magwitch - a possibility of what Pip may become.
- Have a sham - Havisham; symbolizes a horrible decay on one hand.
- Memorial to dead hope - since she was left at the alter.
- Estella is trained to be a heartbreaker by Havisham.
- Havisham is hope - she's rich but she's not what she seems, dichotomy.
- A pip is a seed: a character who has not yet become.
- A desire to be something more.
- Fairytale world is interrupted by moral world of give and take.
- Joe Gargery and Jaggers: opposite extremes.
- Is this like I?: J is interchangeable with I; both the names start with J.
- Jagger knows the darkest secret about everyone, which can hurt them
- Joe - rich emotionally, not financially.
- Jagger - cold and objective.
- Jagger - Estella, Molly, Havisham, early Magwitch.
- Wemmick - one guy at home and one guy at office, with former being foil to the latter.
- Magwitch - represents Pip in worse conditions.
- Magwitch - leads different life in childhood and after friends with Pip, negative and positive, respectively.
- Four realizations of Pip: 1) Havisham is not fairy godmother. 2) Estella not intended for Pip but only training process. 3) Magwitch authored Pip's expectations. 4) You can't be told, you have to seek out.
- Characterization and transformation of Pip depends on Joe and Jagger.
- Pip is a fantacist - a major difference between Joe, Jagger and Pip.
- "Pip wants to dance but doesn't want to pay for the band."
- Pip - talks about his imperfections but doesn't understand it; only a confession.
- Many similarities between Pip and Holden, from the Catcher in the Rye.
Thursday, January 15, 2015
AP PREP POST 1: SIDDHARTHA
1) A bildungsroman, or coming-of-age novel, recounts the psychological or moral development of its protagonist from youth to maturity, when this character recognizes his or her place in the world. Select a single pivotal moment in the psychological or moral development of the protagonist of a bildungsroman. Then write a well-organized essay that analyzes how that single moment shapes the meaning of the work as a whole. (http://media.collegeboard.com/digitalServices/pdf/ap/apcentral/ap13_frq_eng_lit.pdf)
2) A symbol is an object, action, or event that represents something or that creates a range of associations beyond itself. In literary works a symbol can express an idea, clarify meaning, or enlarge literal meaning. Select a novel or play and, focusing on one symbol, write an essay analyzing how that symbol functions in the work and what it reveals about the characters or themes of the work as a whole. Do not merely summarize the plot: Siddhartha - river. (http://jneff.wikispaces.com/file/view/Open+Question+Practice+Activity.doc)
3) What did Siddhartha learn from the Buddha? Use one quote from the text to support your response. (http://ecals.weebly.com/ap-english-literature.html)
4) Siddhartha's last exchange with his friend Govinda could best be described as:
a) humorous b) hyperbolic c) self-indulgent d) sarcastic e) indifferent
(http://www.learnerator.com/ap-english-literature/q/1041/siddhartha-and-govinda)
5) In order to experience the entirety of birth, life, death, and decay, one technique that Siddhartha uses is:
a) starvation b) astral projection c) meditation d) studying e) concentration
(http://www.learnerator.com/ap-english-literature/q/1041/siddhartha-and-govinda)
All of these questions, first of all, provide me with enough proof the importance of Siddhartha and its literary techniques used along with its unique theme and tone. Even though I have personal experience with being a Brahmin, I'm also expected to better understand the passage through its depth. Also, the multiple choice questions are extremely specific and detailed. So along with paying attention with my reading, another technique that can be used for MCQs is to try and find for the answer through skimming and not waste my time reading. My goal is to be able to better at understanding the techniques used in a literary work.
2) A symbol is an object, action, or event that represents something or that creates a range of associations beyond itself. In literary works a symbol can express an idea, clarify meaning, or enlarge literal meaning. Select a novel or play and, focusing on one symbol, write an essay analyzing how that symbol functions in the work and what it reveals about the characters or themes of the work as a whole. Do not merely summarize the plot: Siddhartha - river. (http://jneff.wikispaces.com/file/view/Open+Question+Practice+Activity.doc)
3) What did Siddhartha learn from the Buddha? Use one quote from the text to support your response. (http://ecals.weebly.com/ap-english-literature.html)
4) Siddhartha's last exchange with his friend Govinda could best be described as:
a) humorous b) hyperbolic c) self-indulgent d) sarcastic e) indifferent
(http://www.learnerator.com/ap-english-literature/q/1041/siddhartha-and-govinda)
5) In order to experience the entirety of birth, life, death, and decay, one technique that Siddhartha uses is:
a) starvation b) astral projection c) meditation d) studying e) concentration
(http://www.learnerator.com/ap-english-literature/q/1041/siddhartha-and-govinda)
All of these questions, first of all, provide me with enough proof the importance of Siddhartha and its literary techniques used along with its unique theme and tone. Even though I have personal experience with being a Brahmin, I'm also expected to better understand the passage through its depth. Also, the multiple choice questions are extremely specific and detailed. So along with paying attention with my reading, another technique that can be used for MCQs is to try and find for the answer through skimming and not waste my time reading. My goal is to be able to better at understanding the techniques used in a literary work.
SIDDHARTHA: NOTES
According to me, the theme is self discovery against individuality.
The tone is anxious, nervous, overwhelmed, and towards the end transforms to excited and confident.
Brahmins are the highest level of class in India: the most religious, mannered, and holiest.
Think of family before self.
Encouraged against asking questions and being curious.
Snake symbolized the evil of the new world and evil of following your heart and leaving your identity and loved ones behind.
The author described Indian culture and the confusion faced by the youth of Brahmins.
The tone is anxious, nervous, overwhelmed, and towards the end transforms to excited and confident.
Brahmins are the highest level of class in India: the most religious, mannered, and holiest.
Think of family before self.
Encouraged against asking questions and being curious.
Snake symbolized the evil of the new world and evil of following your heart and leaving your identity and loved ones behind.
The author described Indian culture and the confusion faced by the youth of Brahmins.
HACKING MY EDUCATION
Last semester was a blurb in my memory. There was so much going on that I wasn't able to grab a moment to stop or think: it was go time. But if last semester was go time, this semester is showtime. My expectation for senior year was to enjoy the last year in high school. Even though I was socially very happy and able to enjoy myself, academically I was equally busy and stressed. My goal for this semester is to manage my academics and my senior year experience with smoothness and without anxiety. This winter break changed me and made me an action taking individual with looking at the future and thinking forward.
Monday, January 12, 2015
BACK FROM WINTER BREAK: CONVERSATION WITH JISU
Even though Jisu and I are collaborating on our masterpiece and doing it together, I thought I should still create a blog post about our conversation and ideas. Jisu and I met up over winter break and began to write a song. At first, I wanted to compose my own music to the lyrics but when we talked, we both agreed to make our masterpiece more of a remix and choose a melody that creates a mood and an environment that fits the theme of our song.
Next, for the writing, we initially created a "pre-write" where we took notes on what was important first: the point of view of the song, the theme of the song, target audience, etc. After this, we both, individually wrote lines that we felt would describe our tone towards our topic, which resulted in similar tone for both of us.
Even though, the lyrics to our song are not completely finished yet, it is definitely a work in progress. Along with writing lyrics, we both discussed a novel for the Literature Analysis, hence the same book. I also felt that we opened up even more than we already were and it was a great experience to be jotted down in senior year memory book!
Next, for the writing, we initially created a "pre-write" where we took notes on what was important first: the point of view of the song, the theme of the song, target audience, etc. After this, we both, individually wrote lines that we felt would describe our tone towards our topic, which resulted in similar tone for both of us.
Even though, the lyrics to our song are not completely finished yet, it is definitely a work in progress. Along with writing lyrics, we both discussed a novel for the Literature Analysis, hence the same book. I also felt that we opened up even more than we already were and it was a great experience to be jotted down in senior year memory book!
BACK FROM WINTER BREAK: LITERATURE ANALYSIS: THE LAST SONG BY NICHOLAS SPARKS
1) Briefly summarize the plot of the novel you read according to elements of plot that you've learned in the past courses. Explain how the narrative fulfills the author's purpose.
a) Introduction/Exposition: The novel begins with Ronnie sitting in a room looking around and gathering the memories. She is then joined by her mother and it is revealed about the pain that Ronnie has been going through for the pas couple months. Ronnie then begins to tell her mom the story of her life changing summer at her dad's house.
b) Rising Action: The relationship between Ronnie and Steve (her father) is not the most traditional and expected one. They have their differences, mostly Ronnie - who likes to stay isolated in her own world. Ronnie meets this handsome boy at the beach, Will. Then her journey begins about truly discovering the meaning of relationships.
c) Conflict: There could be two conflicts possible: one could be Ronnie being unable to forgive her father and taking decisions solely based on her naive opinions; second could be Ronnie and her brother, Jonah, discovering their father's cancer.
d) Climax: First: After her father forgives and believes her that she did not shoplift, Ronnie began to realize that she might be wrong about who her father truly is. Second: the moment when Steve dies.
e) Falling Action: Ronnie decides to stay with her father until the end, until his death.
f) Resolution: Ronnie finally plays "The Last Song" by her dad on the piano and decides to take her career forward in music.
The author's third person omniscient point of view allows him to develop the characters and transform them along the way. He shows the gradual transformation of a typical high-school-graduate-teenager to a determined-career-seeker, something that all the readers have gone through sometime during their lives are are going through currently. His narration opened his characters and story up for the readers to analyze.
2) Succinctly describe the theme of the novel.
The theme of the novel, to me, is complexity of life and relationships. The necessity of love, faith, forgiveness, mistakes, are all too important to miss. Life is all about taking chances, staying true to yourself while doing so, letting go in life (forgiving), and most importantly - appreciate and love all that you have before it's too late. It is also about the transformation from a rebellious daughter to a mature and patient and positive one.
3) Describe the author's tone. Include a minimum of three excerpts that illustrates your points.
The author's tone was straightforward and completely non-biased. He was the kind of author who would present his facts to the audience with minute detail and then let them interpret it openly.
4) Describe a minimum of ten literary elements/techniques you observed that strengthened your understanding of the author's purpose, the text's theme and/or your sense of the tone. For each, please include textual support to help illustrate the point for your readers.
1) Foreshadowing: "Thankfully, the pain in his stomach had lessened since the morning, but he'd been nervous for days, and he knew it would come back. He'd always had a weak stomach." (Pg: 13)
2) Allusion: "'Happy families are all alike; every unhappy family is unhappy in its own way.'" "Was that before or after you claimed to have read Tolstoy?" (Pg: 128)
3) Imagery: " The paint was peeling, the roof was missing numerous shingles, and the porch was rotting." (Pg: 15)
4) Irony: "Inside, the walls were painted cheery colors, and a vase of fresh flowers stood on the dining room table." (Pg: 89) [Describing Blaze's house, who's a goth herself.]
5) Flashback: "Ronnie hesitated; then, with a sigh, she began to tell a story that still felt utterly senseless to her, even with the benefit of hindsight." (Pg: 4)
6) Onomatopoeia: "Behind him, he could hear the steady beep of the heart monitor." (Pg: 80)
7) Metaphor: "Just off the bridge, summer traffic had slowed the line of cars to a crawl." (Pg: 7)
8) Simile:"He bent and kissed Ronnie gently on the cheek, feeling again the undertow of his love for her, a joy as intense as pain." (Pg: 168)
9) Characterization: "He was forty-eight years old. His marriage had ended, his daughter avoided him, and his son was growing up without him." (Pg: 14)
10) Point of View: "Ronnie slouched in the front seat of her car, wondering why on earth her mom and dad hated her so much." (Pg: 5) [Ronnie is the main protagonist of the novel]
CHARACTERIZATION:
1) Describe two examples of direct characterization and two examples of indirect characterization. Why does the author use both approaches, and to what end?
"But right now, Ronnie had no choice in the matter. Because she was still seventeen. Because of a trick of the calendar." - Direct Characterization. "They were both thin and pretty, with blindingly white teeth, and obviously used to being the center of attention and having boys drool all over them." - Direct Characterization.
"I don't want a Nemo shirt, okay?"
"Nemo's cool."
"Maybe if you're six," Ronnie retorted.
"Suit yourself." - Indirect Characterization.
"'Happy families are all alike; every unhappy family is unhappy in its own way,'" he quoted, pointing to her book."It's the first line in your book. I always thought there was a lot of truth in that. Or maybe that's what my English teacher said. I can't really remember. I read it last semester." - Indirect Characterization.
The author approaches both direct and indirect characterization to appeal to the readers and have the characters seem more understandable and relatable. I believe that the author uses both in such a manner and to such an end that I knew about the characters like I would with my family or friends. Sparks took his time to deliver the past of the characters so well that the reactions of the characters seemed natural, expected, and able to analyze it.
2) Does the author's syntax and/or diction change when s/he focuses on character? How? Example(s)?
The syntax doesn't majorly change because of the point of view that Sparks uses. This point of view almost seems like an outsider, not playing part in the story whatsoever but still knows every detail of it, is narrating it. Since it's only one "narrator" of the story, there is no point (in fact, it wouldn't make sense) for the author to change syntax and diction when s/he focuses on one character.
3) Is the protagonist static or dynamic? Flat or round? Explain.
The protagonist(s) is/are dynamic and round. It might not be exaggeration if it were to be said that these are one of the most dynamic characters ever written by a writer. He achieves this because he portrays a third person omniscient point of view but provides different perspectives of the same incident through different characters' interpretation. This novel (kind of) becomes like a diary where readers have three-four main characters have their inner feelings and emotions revealed for readers to analyze. Even though a lot of dialogue does take place, the author takes his time to, extremely, gradually develop each character with a detailed description about their past, present, and hopes, goals, and wishes for the future. Sparks gives the words and pages a character and the readers truly need to grasp the reason behind a character's actions, thoughts, and feelings.
4) After reading the book did you come away feeling like you'd met a person or read a character? Analyze one textual example that illustrates your reaction.
After reading the book, I truly did feel that I had met a person but not just anyone - myself. I feel as though it would be extremely hard (and almost impossible) to find one textual evidence that summarizes my feelings. The kind of character that Ronnie is, caring but not able to show it or honest and expecting loyalty and honesty in return and many more, makes me feel like I am looking in a mirror. The character might not be a genetically identical copy of me in terms of dressing style or behavior or look, but the emotions that she felt throughout the book and the hardships and emotional obstacles that she went through, I knew who and what she was.
a) Introduction/Exposition: The novel begins with Ronnie sitting in a room looking around and gathering the memories. She is then joined by her mother and it is revealed about the pain that Ronnie has been going through for the pas couple months. Ronnie then begins to tell her mom the story of her life changing summer at her dad's house.
b) Rising Action: The relationship between Ronnie and Steve (her father) is not the most traditional and expected one. They have their differences, mostly Ronnie - who likes to stay isolated in her own world. Ronnie meets this handsome boy at the beach, Will. Then her journey begins about truly discovering the meaning of relationships.
c) Conflict: There could be two conflicts possible: one could be Ronnie being unable to forgive her father and taking decisions solely based on her naive opinions; second could be Ronnie and her brother, Jonah, discovering their father's cancer.
d) Climax: First: After her father forgives and believes her that she did not shoplift, Ronnie began to realize that she might be wrong about who her father truly is. Second: the moment when Steve dies.
e) Falling Action: Ronnie decides to stay with her father until the end, until his death.
f) Resolution: Ronnie finally plays "The Last Song" by her dad on the piano and decides to take her career forward in music.
The author's third person omniscient point of view allows him to develop the characters and transform them along the way. He shows the gradual transformation of a typical high-school-graduate-teenager to a determined-career-seeker, something that all the readers have gone through sometime during their lives are are going through currently. His narration opened his characters and story up for the readers to analyze.
2) Succinctly describe the theme of the novel.
The theme of the novel, to me, is complexity of life and relationships. The necessity of love, faith, forgiveness, mistakes, are all too important to miss. Life is all about taking chances, staying true to yourself while doing so, letting go in life (forgiving), and most importantly - appreciate and love all that you have before it's too late. It is also about the transformation from a rebellious daughter to a mature and patient and positive one.
3) Describe the author's tone. Include a minimum of three excerpts that illustrates your points.
The author's tone was straightforward and completely non-biased. He was the kind of author who would present his facts to the audience with minute detail and then let them interpret it openly.
4) Describe a minimum of ten literary elements/techniques you observed that strengthened your understanding of the author's purpose, the text's theme and/or your sense of the tone. For each, please include textual support to help illustrate the point for your readers.
1) Foreshadowing: "Thankfully, the pain in his stomach had lessened since the morning, but he'd been nervous for days, and he knew it would come back. He'd always had a weak stomach." (Pg: 13)
2) Allusion: "'Happy families are all alike; every unhappy family is unhappy in its own way.'" "Was that before or after you claimed to have read Tolstoy?" (Pg: 128)
3) Imagery: " The paint was peeling, the roof was missing numerous shingles, and the porch was rotting." (Pg: 15)
4) Irony: "Inside, the walls were painted cheery colors, and a vase of fresh flowers stood on the dining room table." (Pg: 89) [Describing Blaze's house, who's a goth herself.]
5) Flashback: "Ronnie hesitated; then, with a sigh, she began to tell a story that still felt utterly senseless to her, even with the benefit of hindsight." (Pg: 4)
6) Onomatopoeia: "Behind him, he could hear the steady beep of the heart monitor." (Pg: 80)
7) Metaphor: "Just off the bridge, summer traffic had slowed the line of cars to a crawl." (Pg: 7)
8) Simile:"He bent and kissed Ronnie gently on the cheek, feeling again the undertow of his love for her, a joy as intense as pain." (Pg: 168)
9) Characterization: "He was forty-eight years old. His marriage had ended, his daughter avoided him, and his son was growing up without him." (Pg: 14)
10) Point of View: "Ronnie slouched in the front seat of her car, wondering why on earth her mom and dad hated her so much." (Pg: 5) [Ronnie is the main protagonist of the novel]
CHARACTERIZATION:
1) Describe two examples of direct characterization and two examples of indirect characterization. Why does the author use both approaches, and to what end?
"But right now, Ronnie had no choice in the matter. Because she was still seventeen. Because of a trick of the calendar." - Direct Characterization. "They were both thin and pretty, with blindingly white teeth, and obviously used to being the center of attention and having boys drool all over them." - Direct Characterization.
"I don't want a Nemo shirt, okay?"
"Nemo's cool."
"Maybe if you're six," Ronnie retorted.
"Suit yourself." - Indirect Characterization.
"'Happy families are all alike; every unhappy family is unhappy in its own way,'" he quoted, pointing to her book."It's the first line in your book. I always thought there was a lot of truth in that. Or maybe that's what my English teacher said. I can't really remember. I read it last semester." - Indirect Characterization.
The author approaches both direct and indirect characterization to appeal to the readers and have the characters seem more understandable and relatable. I believe that the author uses both in such a manner and to such an end that I knew about the characters like I would with my family or friends. Sparks took his time to deliver the past of the characters so well that the reactions of the characters seemed natural, expected, and able to analyze it.
2) Does the author's syntax and/or diction change when s/he focuses on character? How? Example(s)?
The syntax doesn't majorly change because of the point of view that Sparks uses. This point of view almost seems like an outsider, not playing part in the story whatsoever but still knows every detail of it, is narrating it. Since it's only one "narrator" of the story, there is no point (in fact, it wouldn't make sense) for the author to change syntax and diction when s/he focuses on one character.
3) Is the protagonist static or dynamic? Flat or round? Explain.
The protagonist(s) is/are dynamic and round. It might not be exaggeration if it were to be said that these are one of the most dynamic characters ever written by a writer. He achieves this because he portrays a third person omniscient point of view but provides different perspectives of the same incident through different characters' interpretation. This novel (kind of) becomes like a diary where readers have three-four main characters have their inner feelings and emotions revealed for readers to analyze. Even though a lot of dialogue does take place, the author takes his time to, extremely, gradually develop each character with a detailed description about their past, present, and hopes, goals, and wishes for the future. Sparks gives the words and pages a character and the readers truly need to grasp the reason behind a character's actions, thoughts, and feelings.
4) After reading the book did you come away feeling like you'd met a person or read a character? Analyze one textual example that illustrates your reaction.
After reading the book, I truly did feel that I had met a person but not just anyone - myself. I feel as though it would be extremely hard (and almost impossible) to find one textual evidence that summarizes my feelings. The kind of character that Ronnie is, caring but not able to show it or honest and expecting loyalty and honesty in return and many more, makes me feel like I am looking in a mirror. The character might not be a genetically identical copy of me in terms of dressing style or behavior or look, but the emotions that she felt throughout the book and the hardships and emotional obstacles that she went through, I knew who and what she was.
BACK FROM WINTER BREAK: MY MASTERPIECE
All this time, I imagined myself glued to my computer doing research for my masterpiece and giving a boring presentation in front of the classroom while what I really wanted to do was not even remotely close to that. My topic, as of now, is to connect the two most important aspects of my life that define who I am - writing and music. Both of these complete me in ways that's completely unexplainable through words. I'm someone who's not so willing to describe myself and my emotions to anyone and open myself up and so to express my emotions, I take the median of music and writing, hence this topic for my masterpiece. By combining these two, I'm not only enriching learning experience for my classmates, but also remixing the two most powerful median in media now and producing an output that every individual can relate to with different interpretations with their various experiences. This topic requires the very most important fields, connecting them directly and/or indirectly. For example, it takes calculation and planning to write a song; it takes skill and knowledge about rhythm and music to remix another work with our own writing; it takes some relation with psychology to write about a theme that all individuals must've experienced sometime during their lifetime; and finally, it takes writing skill to pour emotions on paper. I have written many poems but I haven't written as many songs to get the experience of it and write it with easiness. So as of now, the only plan I have is to communicate with Jisu and collaborate about our possible melody and lyrics and how we want the audience to feel when we do present. Along with the song, I want to have a one-on-one with our audience and get their perspective, opinions, questions, and comments about our song and its process. Personally, I think the only resource we both need is our thinking ability! But if we do have an option of meeting somebody, I would like to get an experience to meet someone who has had an experience with all three: music, writing, and presentation. I would like some background as to how to present ourselves in terms of body language, range of voice, and attitude. I think, for me, it would be extremely cool to make a kind of music video where there's only one or two individuals singing but the facial expressions or physical actions of many other individuals incorporating the lyrics with their own interpretation of it as the actual video. Also, first, I would like to show the video mute, then just the audio, and then both of them together and then ask the audience which one they could connect with the most and why. I will be collaborating with both Jisu and Dr. Preston (maybe even the class) and see what, how, and if I will be able to achieve this goal!
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