Edward
Said’s perception to see exile as a “potent, even enriching” experience for any
individual is somewhat confusing to grasp as an exile means, denotatively, to
separate or banish. How can banishment, in any form, be enriching? Hence this statement
by Said only captures the concept of perspective: perspective towards diverse
people; perspective towards diverse culture; perspective towards diverse
traditions; even perspective towards diverse events in life. In The
Poisonwood Bible by Barbara Kingslover, this theme of perspective was
evidently discernible throughout the book. Leah, one of the four daughters
(also the protagonists), experienced the “unhealable rift forced” in her life
by her father the most. But she chose to acclimatize with the pain and sadness
and instead make it an enriching experience that will make her mature as a
human being both emotionally and professionally.
To make a
shift from staying in her own oyster to being thrown into the vast ocean of
possibilities, Leah managed to make her transitory period of “visiting” Africa
an exceedingly enriching time of her life. Enriching has multiple connotations
to it: getting exposed to new cultures, new perspectives, new traditions, and
growing as a person both emotionally and personally. Leah enriched herself as a
person in such a way that she received more opportunities to become more
tolerable to diverse cultures. The proof of her elevation as a character is her
marrying Anatole, a native of Africa, and settling down with him in a place
that snatched her sister away and ripped her entire family apart. Being a
fourteen year old, she became so mature that she would braid her sister Ruth
May’s hair when she was sick and maybe even depressed to cheer her up. She also adapted with the other native
children by teaching them how to play a game like “Mother May I?” while her
other sisters were either too busy locking herself in the room or complaining
about not having new clothes and mirror and makeup. But she still was human. Were there not any problems? Of course there were and they were worse than what
a regular teen would face in the west.
The
entire shift from coming from the free and safe land of America to a dangerous
and dependent land of Africa was alienating. Leah’s dad, Nathan Price,
practically picked her up from the ground and snatched her from her own perfect
little shell and basically threw her in this mess where there was lack of
clothes, food, hygiene, etc. With the little kids dying almost everyday from
some kind of disease and hearing the mother and other women shriek for that
child’s life, Leah’s heart had a corner of fear set in there that if her family
was next to face the lamentable. She herself faced death very closely when ants
came from under the ground and attacked everyone. It’s easy to overcome an
infectious, but curable, disease but it is extremely hard – almost impossible –
to overcome your fear. This fear in Leah’s heart was still there when the book
ended and the author kept it so that the readers can predict that the fear
would always be there.
The
fears to lose the ones you love: it exists in every single individual in the
world but you have to learn how to deal with it. Will you let it control you
until you either become depressed or obsessed, just like Leah’s mom, Orleanna
Price? Or will you lock it in a corner and have it make you the type of person
that you never imagined yourself to be? Like Leah did. The choice was yours and
will always be yours.
Wow Naiomi, great job! You addressed the prompt as well as included evidence from the text. This shows your real understanding of it and that has elevated your essay to the next level. Your vocabulary is fabulous and the rhetorical questions were a nice touch. Wonderful essay. Liz
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ReplyDeleteI really liked how you went very deep with your essay, like how Dr. Preston warned us, you "analyzed" the characteristics of Leah rather than "summarizing" the plot. You answered the prompt by mentioning what was enriching and alienating for Leah when she had to move because of her father. I wish you had more examples to support your main idea of the essay. Other than that, I enjoyed reading your essay.
I look forward to reading more of your essays!
From. Jisu (:
You did a great job Naiomi I honestly don't have any words. I really enjoyed how deep you got into the subject and you also had the examples to back up your points with of course great vocabulary. I think you approached it really well and I wouldn't make any changes. Nice job Naiomi :)
ReplyDeleteGood job, Naiomi- amazing effort put in this essay! Loved your vocab and rhetorical questions, as Liz said. They really made the reader think and have a new POV concerning Leah's character in the story. The conclusion could've been longer and could've tied up your essay, focusing on Leah, a bit nicer and 'tighter,' however fabulous job!
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